Tuesday, 8 November 2011

New narrative

I found after creating the first part of my animation that the narrative was just not clear enough so have come up with a few scenes which I am going to add in which will hopefully create a better story. The new scenes that I am going to add are:
  • An establishing sequence which will introduce the cat as the only household pet which 'rules the roost'. This will be done with a sequence of shots showing the cat being pampered in different ways eg. being offered food and it turning its nose up until it is something which it likes or having its nails painted or hair brushed.
  • A long shot to show that cats need are priority with its bed placed next to the fire place in the living room.
  • After the dogs journey to the house at night the cat wakes the next day to find that her bed has been moved over and shoved in a corner and the dogs bed in her place.
  • The cats face will be angry at the sight of the dog being the owners new favourite pet- this will be shown in a close up shot.
  • Now that the dog is the owners new best friend the cat tries to think of ways to get rid of him. The cat is watching TV on the owners lap on night and sees hammer throwing on the olympics so gets an idea when the dog follows her outside.
  • The sequence of the cat watching the TV and getting an idea is repeated 2 more times afterwards which leads to scenes of the dog being taken out with the bins, and it running into a glass door.
  • Each day the cat also moves its bed back to its original place, but the dogs bed always ends back up there.

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