Like I carried out for my poster feedback, I also printed out a hard copy of my magazine review page for people to view, read and comment on. I also posted it onto the online social networking sites Twitter and Facebook however this was less successful. People prefered to just 'like' my work rather than post any comments which meant I have to gather more first hand research.
" 11 sentences down on the left column. Should that say "the quest to get rid of Buddy"? Doesn't quite make sense as it is written. Otherwise, it's fab and I love it :)"
"I think thats its a really good idea having a storyboard of how the film is actually made as I found it really interesting! I didn't know there were so many processes in making an animation"
"The pawprints running across the page look really cool, like the dog had walked across the page!"
"I think maybe there should be some screen shots from within the film as in most film reviews you get to see images of the stars or parts of main events like a car chase"
"I think its brilliant and looks just like a real film review!"
"There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes but apart from that its really good!"
"In the main film title the name buddy is all in lower case and on the opposite page, the first letter is a capital, is it meant to be like this? There are also a few spelling mistakes"
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